Dragon deck

Could someone rate this light and darkness dragon deck?
I can take commentary and if its too bad I'll try something different.

https://imgur.com/NZIlN Post it for seven :p

That's not really good

You should remove normals dragons for lyla and ryko. +2 lightpuslasr too

Remove Burden. This card is pretty useless. You have big monsters, and burden doesn't affect xyz.

For traps, you should choose bottomless OR D prison. Not 1 of each.

idk dragons too much but i would remove 1 card like scrap just to reduce the number to 41 so it can be a bit faster, but you don't really need to i try to stay 40 but up to 45 is still good. but yea looks good and fast n lol gotta love the triple 5 headed dragon

thing is, burden of the mighty got me out of a lot of situations already, and it's become my fave spell card.
That's why I put it in every single one of my decks

And scrap-iron has the exact same story, only this time for being my fave trap card of course :p

lol i understand and idk what burden of the mighty does lol never seen it before xD but now that i see it does seem like a nice card

it is, my first dragon deck once duelled I guy and without it I would have lost

1st: to 40 plz
2nd: mirage out
3rd: mirror and 2 f.g.ds out
4th: use full extra deck
5th: 1-2 red-eyes wyvern out
6th: 1-2 prime to side and out of main
7th: all normal cards out
8th: +1 eclipse
9th: -all zahak
10th: +2 lightpulsar
11th: 1-3 ravine out (i dont like it)
12th: +1 darkflare
13th: +1 mst
14th: +1 apocralyph
15th: +2 galaxy eyes (only when u like it)
16th: +1 call

i didnt counted, if the deck is at 40 now, when not pm me at dn for changes.

o...k...
In some of these things I don't see the logic
prime out? why, he can stop destruction cards and allows me to send more cards to my grave
ravine out? gets more dragons to grave
Galaxy can be specialled by sacrificing two monsters with more than 2000 atk, but you tell me to take out my normal monsters.
Wyvern out? he can easily summon my red yes metal darkness, his only weakness is his type.
I get apocralyph, but only put him in once, because he 's not that powerful
full extra deck: how?

sorry, wyverns weakness should be atribute

am i the only one who knows how to post the image?thats it though..

He didn't understand why completely, and now I'll give my views I guess

1st: to 40 plz (increases chances for your cards you need, decreases chance of dead draws)
2nd: mirage out (this card is ok but, its ok to keep 1 but it can be dead sometimes)
3rd: mirror and 2 f.g.ds out (dragon's mirror, completely unneeded and -2 f.g.d.'s the real point of a future fusion and f.g.d. is for material in your graveyard, if you get f.g.d its just a +)
4th: use full extra deck (part of why you need -2 f.g.d out, can help you with this)
5th: 1-2 red-eyes wyvern out (2 is fine but you need atleast 1 out, you already have enough ways to get red-eyes MD out)
6th: 1-2 prime to side and out of main (prime is good, 2 is alright, add 1 in side. And atleast question to take 1 out for side or not)
7th: all normal cards out (I don't care if there 2k attack or not, the point is to get your big stuff out in this deck and fast/well. Highly recommend this 1)
8th: +1 eclipse (definately run 3, its a big +, part of your searching as I said)
9th: -all zahak (why do you even run this just being honest You don't run more then 1-2 even IN an evilswarm)
10th: +2 lightpulsar (GET 1 MORE OF THESE, LIKELY 2! Big part of the deck, i HIGHLY recommend 3 for so many reasons)
11th: 1-3 ravine out (2 is maybe, i personaly wouldn't recommend running any, but 1 is ok if you really want to keep)
12th: +1 darkflare (you don't need a ton of these but if you follow tehse tips you will be under 40, so you can have room for 1 more, another s.s. with gy material+eclipe effect)
13th: +1 mst (traps can shut you down, very helpful with 3)
14th: +1 apocralyph (alot of people only run 1, but it is a very nice card, add a 2nd one IF you have the room for it after this)
15th: +2 galaxy eyes (yes its an option, but personally I wouldn't.. this 1 is completely give and take)
16th: +1 call (you already have 2, thats fine... 3 is upto you)

As she said, I can help you alot with the e-deck/side deck and then the Main Deck while its not at 40.

call is 3 cause its gr8 with lightpulsar

and im a facking HE!

WELL I'M SORRY I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY BUT EVEYTIME I SEE YOUR NAME AND COLOR I AUTO-THINK SHE!